Q: Some people often enhance their minds to keep motivated. On the other hand, some people humble their attitudes to consider others. Discuss both views and give your opinions. Write at least 250 words.

Some people often praise themselves to enhance their motivation. On the other hand, some people tend to humble themselves to encourage others well.  I think both attitudes have great advantages. This essay will explain the advantages of enhancing or humbling.

On the one hand, people can keep their best motivation well. First, they can keep their good condition too. For example, if some people like sports, they often go jogging every morning. Therefore, they can get up in the early morning. As a result, they can keep conditions with regular lives. Second, they can keep the best motivation from making common friends. For instance, when they would like to make new friends, they tend to find common points. As a result, they can enhance their motivation for each other through common hobbies.

On the other hand, the team can devote the project to a humble leader. To illustrate, some leaders are good at hiding their advantages themselves well. Instead, they can find great points of members, such as doing their routine tasks well. Therefore, members also can find great points with each other. Also, some assistants, such as secretaries, they can support their leader well. For example, if the leader can not speak well, they can reinforce the opinions that the leader could not say. As a result, they can make a strong team.

In conclusion, people must enhance their motivation to retain the best condition. Also, they need to humble each other due to a strong relationship. Overall, both attitudes have great advantages.

(255 words)

By Shinichi. I

Shinichi Ito (Mapman) is living in Sapporo, Hokkaido (Japan). He was diagnosed with Autism Spectrum Disorder (ASD, previous Asperger’s Syndrome) in 2004. He started his blog “Aspe Times” in 2006 as “Information for Aspergians”. In 2009, he changed a blog theme from “Asperger” to “Learning English”. Shinichi had been engaged in room reservations at a first-class hotel, as an assistant between 2008 and 2018. After retiring from the hotel, he learned web design and English writing. he moved his blog to WordPress. Shinichi created his original English essay through IELTS writing (Task 1, Task 2). Sometimes, he wrote his free articles, diaries, and book reviews too. In 2022, he changed his blog title from “Aspe Times” to “ASD IELTS” in May. In July 2022, he released his first blog book on Kindle. In March 2023, Shinichi started selling Paperback too. Please click the below button if you are interested price in Canada. He is selling this book on Amazon in these countries too. In October 2023, he was officially diagnosed ADHD too. Shinichi loves Canada. He is planning to immigrate to Canada in the future.

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